Firefox's poems!!!! O.o

Comment if you want to:
Some Girl

Some girl I saw
Walking in the streets

Looked like a poor girl
or a poor soul at the least

Ripped pants,torn shirt
Shredded jacket,cut shoes

These items she wore told her place in time
As I stood there writing this little rhyme
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River of Tears(I never really liked this one, kinda just thought of it actually)

The River of Tears
A very down place

A very down place
Full of sorrow and greed

Every tear that's been shred
Every tear that's been cried out

Falls into one river
The River of Tears
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Lightning

It squiggles it squirms
It crackles it cracks

Beauty a glow
Setting fires below

It swindles it swerves
It twitches it curves

Fire in the clouds
Sending rain to melt it down

Lightning is just this:
A random dark abyss
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Dark Abyss(add-on of Lightning, I didn't personally like the idea but many did so I did it)

Remember how I told
Lightning is a dark abyss

Well no one quite knows
Why it wants to be like this

Just a little bit of rain
In a few little clouds

Causes it to be dark like this
In a random dark abyss
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Outside Winter World

The outside winter world
It's a wonder to behold

With it's snow-banked sidewalks
And it's snow-capped trees

It's no sign of wildlife
And it's clear white sky

It looks like time has stopped
With beauty all around us

All the way around us
In the beautiful outside winter world

omg thought they were rly great i liked the 1st 1 the best

hey i'm the only one who signs here!!!!!!!!!!!!111
just kidding xD

nice poems..

O.o a lot of people in my school DIDN'T like that one so thank you^^

i like it becuz it kinda shw desimination and just by how someone looks others judge them

I hate how people judge by looks! I can't stand those people!

i know and it is sad becuz then they never get to rly know u they just get and think there rite

Ya...I mean I mostly like girls out of there PERSONALITIES!

yea cool but i hate when ppl discriminate i mean i am the most popular person in my school and my friends r soo mean they always do things like that but i guess i am popular becuz i am nice to everyone

I'm not the most popular in high school, but I am sort of popular because of how unbelievably nice I am, this one time I gave like 60$ to a random kid.

thats nice and stupid

I'm kinda rich so.....O.o'''

omg !!!! no joke me tooo i think my friend was jealous of me becuz i got an iphone and an itouch at the same time and she was like whats the point and then i got the vovger

Lol I got a laptop, cell phone and iPod at the same time and my friends were like "Wtf! x.x. I want that!"

omg was it an apple cuz i have one too i was gonna get the air but i was like nah and my friend was like u have a huge ass apple computer ( the biggest size they have btw ) in ur room y do u need a apple laptop

Um it wasn't it is a...........Dell I believe.

oooo cool

I lub my Dell <3

i love my apple

Good for you o.O
Ok I need other people to comment other than you and Nar"uto

i like it ^^

Omg <3333 Demon you commented!!!!!!!!!! ^^

lol yes i did

Well thank you! *smiles*

np *smiles*

=) Well anyways I'm bored...